Today, those that entice the youth,
With satirical honey flavoured poisonous eloquence,
Neither nurtures the youth in need,
Nor do wish to miss their egoistic tea,
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beautiful poem with a good message this poem offers many direction and possibilities
Dear Queeny I like your elaborated vies of life problems and call for the youth. It is a great write. I invite you to read my poems and givr your views!
beautiful.................. a very nice poem possessing a great message............ i also invite u to read mine
An `open call ` that potentially serves a purpose.. But there will be no change as the youngsters are appearing to be travelling in a derailed train that does not move any direction. Let us do our rescue operations.. Thank you Queeny for coming back.
the fifth verse: hold on oh youth from that point on is the key to their awakening! excellent write!
A good message to the youth Queeny. Please watch your tenses here and there.
A call to youth to aspire to greater things, to not be dragged down by the mundane and dangers of our world. Good, solid poem, Queeny.
Shocking bills! ! Thanks for sharing.