Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Open Call Comments

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Today, those that entice the youth,
With satirical honey flavoured poisonous eloquence,
Neither nurtures the youth in need,
Nor do wish to miss their egoistic tea,
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Queeny Gona
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2017

Shocking bills! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

beautiful poem with a good message this poem offers many direction and possibilities

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V P Mahur 06 March 2014

Dear Queeny I like your elaborated vies of life problems and call for the youth. It is a great write. I invite you to read my poems and givr your views!

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Shraddha The Poetess 27 February 2014

beautiful.................. a very nice poem possessing a great message............ i also invite u to read mine

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Dinesan Madathil 26 February 2014

An `open call ` that potentially serves a purpose.. But there will be no change as the youngsters are appearing to be travelling in a derailed train that does not move any direction. Let us do our rescue operations.. Thank you Queeny for coming back.

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Louis Rams 25 February 2014

the fifth verse: hold on oh youth from that point on is the key to their awakening! excellent write!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 February 2014

A good message to the youth Queeny. Please watch your tenses here and there.

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Charles Darnell 25 February 2014

A call to youth to aspire to greater things, to not be dragged down by the mundane and dangers of our world. Good, solid poem, Queeny.

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