Tuesday, April 24, 2007
Open Beams. Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I want open beams in the ceiling of my mind
plenty of lights, lots of space,
maybe a shadow or two inside.
There I can swing from rung to rung
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Geoff Warden
24 April 2007
Wow.........Building piece by peice.....imagery is very well placed 10/10
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8/2/2025 4:36:45 PM # 1.0.0
Geoff is right the imagry is fantastic, taking one to higher limits. I love the partial line 'ceiling of my mind'. Fabulous Shelley, nothing surprises me with you anymore, you are truly an excellent writer, I'm so happy you're my friend. Melvina