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A refined poetic imagination, Deborah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

I am always open with people, and never lie, . It tends to get me into trouble at times, wearing my heart on my sleeve. My heart gets broken and my soul trampled upon... but I cannot change who I am for anyone. This is a very insightful look at people Deborah, I like this one quite a lot! Good Ink! -Kelly.

Good advice.

Come forward, strong and ready, you are so alive Take steps toward chances took to survive Trust the one who is honest and will show you the way Commit to tomorrow, your future can begin today this stanza stands out and hits straight in the heart....nice words, strong message, and very relevant to the world at large. I am still sinking in deep in this poem and enjoying the downward drift, this stanza is all over me...this is tooo ggggggggggggggggggggggggoooooooooooooooooood

Nice theme to ponder on. Each verse is eloquently penned. Liked the wording of this lay. Nice finishing line. On a whole its good write.