Sunday, February 1, 2009

Opaque Comments

Rating: ★4.5

Stop being so opaque!
Oh why, why can't you see
That I won't ever hurt you
Just let your inner self be free-
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Leslie Ching
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Surelychoo Certain 03 February 2009

: D if we were transparent we'd be seethru. XD jk jk nice poem. i envy ur talent: /

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Eddie Roa 02 February 2009

a nice plea for transparency for the beloved. nice write

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<font color=blue>Krista <font color=blue>Churchill 01 February 2009

well penned nice work Krista

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Autumn Stoddard 01 February 2009

I really liked the rhyme scheme you used here. It is such an upbeat poem, which is why I believe I've enjoyed it so much. Well done.

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
Leslie Ching
Leslie Ching
Toronto, ON, Canada
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