Thursday, February 27, 2014

Oops! Shoes Doesn’t Fit Her! Comments

Rating: 5.0

He loved one
Married next one
His parents were the happy ones.
He cheated everyone one.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2014

Although it rarely happens in South Asia but it is common in most of the world. It's an interesting write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 March 2014

Wow...Dear Soul you are back. I am so happy.

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Unwritten Soul 26 March 2014

Hmm sounds like Cinderella has gained weight but she still a legendary princess! joking_SOul

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Dave Walker 11 March 2014

A great poem with a good story to it.

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Lyn Paul 03 March 2014

Great words Geetha. Those who treat others with no respect do lose out eventually. Thank You

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Neela Nath Das 02 March 2014

A true picture of our society.You depicted it very well.Hubbies must learn a lesson from the character you penned here.Beautiful!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 March 2014

Again an inspiring one with a good message..............Geetha..........live and let live with respective ideals........

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Tadasha Tripathy 28 February 2014

what I can say about this poem I don't know. Every day I am watching hundreds of such cases. it's the reality. I liked it very much.

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 February 2014

The person in question did not know what he really wanted and thus he tries to fit his wife into his beloved shoes. A nice and serious poem with great humour.

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 February 2014

The person in question did not know what he really wanted and thus he tries to fit his wife into his beloved shoes. A nice and serious poem with great humour.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 February 2014

Please live how you want to live At the same time respect others life also. Philosophy nicely stated and humorously developed in the poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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