Saturday, January 31, 2015

Oops! Comments

Rating: 4.8

What a world in which we live now? Oops!
Many atrocities are being committed, but no one brings them to the books.
You heard about those crooks,
And how they shot innocent souls
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Abekah Emmanuel
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Jak Black 02 February 2015

Once more another well meaning and well intentioned piece, as usual well written. Oops! would suggest, to me, a mistake, but I fail to see how all the malady in this world is unintentional. Too much inequality in this world and until that is sorted I can't see things getting any better, probably get worse. A good poem but maybe a tad naive. Well done.

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Lorraine Colon 31 January 2015

I don't know if this world will ever have a new look. I think we will become so desensitized to the atrocities that they will no longer shock us, and therefore the world will seem to be a better, nicer place. I hope I'm wrong..... then I'll be able to say oops! Very well written poem.

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Abekah Emmanuel

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