Friday, May 1, 2009

Ooh! She Digs.......Delilah’s Dalliance Comments

Rating: 4.3

She’s got style an a perfect flick
Ankles smooth and arms are slick

Swaying an swinging out the house
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Marilyn Lott 13 June 2009

Had to read it and was not disappointed. Fascinating and skillfully written. I agree, a '10! ' not a 6! Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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a very well written poem..who vote for you is that you..so from me 10 for you

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