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lovely poem indeed liked the way you pen your feelings

thank u so much for this strong feeling u expressed deeply, it really takes u to a beautiful world we all crave to live and we all longing for to come. beautiful words beautiful heart and a beautiful mind. thank u.

love it that a really gd poem..i can't believe that some one would do some thing like that, too bad for u look for a new gf..jk

I enjoyed this poem...love has a life of its own... emotions like our's. As my 11 years old grand daughter's poem 'Memories A photo of the past A lesson for the future from the bad times and the good They are travel packs and they are hard to carry We may not remember them But they are still there They don't want to be forgotten Because a memory holds a thousand smiles Yes love and the memoies are 'travel packs' your poem is so well written with all the end rhymes that's so pleasing to the ear...a 10+++

Dear Dickson, Looks like a strong, strong feeling expressed here. I, and I think everyone of us, have had real strong feelings in our lives and sometimes we are so overpowered by them. Expressing our feelings through writing can bring a wonderful soothing. In between the lines I can see a poet with a wonderful personality and good values. I am sure our Creator has a wonderful future for you in his master plan. Keep listening to your heart, listening to your soul and slowly bitterness gives way to peaceful acceptance and grace. I am praying for our peace of mind and happiness.