Saturday, February 9, 2019

Onze Grote Natie Comments

Rating: 5.0

De zon is ondergronds,
De maan bloedt heftig,
Democratie is een grote farce,
Leiders leiden de natie,
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Prabir Gayen 12 March 2019

Like this poem translate more poems....thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 February 2019

I have viewed the English version of a friend Prabir. This is noble and notable, dear Sylvia....10+++++

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Meethi Mondal 09 February 2019

Beautiful poem..... thanks

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Prabir Gayen 09 February 2019

Gratefulness from the bottom of my heart dear poetess...you are really genius...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 March 2019

A gift from God, Prabir ji. That sweet insight you own, is the greatest gift from the Lord, had I more time, I have translated more. You created lovely heart warming poems, Prabir. I used to create poems in my mother tongue too. Thank you that you like the translation.

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Prabir Gayen 09 February 2019

Sylvia Frances Chan...a true heart and genuine poetess.... Extraordinary talent... Very few can equal Her beautiful mind.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2019

I feel flattered, humbled and honoured, dear poet. Happiness fills my heart having read your comment-compliment. It is in fact your creation, Prabir. An excellent call of emergency. Congrats.

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Srijita Mondal 09 February 2019

I have read the English poem too..both are great instances of literature 10+

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2019

Thank you so much for your kindest response and the precious 10. It is constantly the small group in the government that dominates the good hearted leaders.The government is not in balance, now you know, but we live on as usual despite the critic. My pen is sharpest, but my heart is not.

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Srijita Mondal 09 February 2019

India is beautiful, it is a Divine place..only a few people are corrupted..Most of the Enlightened Masters of the World are born here.. There are some negative people everywhere around the world..we should make peace and Love our weapons to kill all negativities Beautiful poetry dear poetess..thank you........🌷🌹🌷 🧡💙💚 🇮🇳

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2019

I know, dear poetess, the country is pure nature easeful-peaceful-serene and it possesses true beauty, but a few hands and bad minds are ruining constantly the pëaceful sphere.That is why the government is not to be trusted anymore. If there is enough money to buy food everyday, so no empty stomach anymore, peace will have its future again.Don´t know when.Thank you for your comment-compliments.

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Prabir Gayen 09 February 2019

Great work dear poetess.....thanks a lot..I am overwhelmed seeing my poem translated in Dutch language....thanks..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2019

You´re most welcome, dear poet. I have done that with pleasure. I regard that as my plight to translate your excellent poem into the Dutch language. As a poetess we have to mention the bad gaps in the system.

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