Tuesday, December 22, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***onto Eternity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.1

in every night star stands and stares
dulcet dawn to come waking by warmth
tea cup in hand spewing scented fumes
eying all through the raves by news
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Dr subhendu kar
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Braja K Sarkar 13 February 2010

Beauty, yet never dies by blooming flowers...Truely poetic! Nice reading..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 January 2010

From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !

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Harold K Schreiberg 10 January 2010

An excellent piece of poetry, full of striking images & contrasts...

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Ken E Hall 08 January 2010

Wonderful poem...eternity is always tomorrow spoken by the past ++10 regards

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John Shea 04 January 2010

Nice poem doc...my girlfriend calls me Dr. John. The Dr. of love.

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Yose Alba 04 January 2010

This is wonderful, I loved the powerful imagery and the way your words flow together. I also read some of your other works and enjoyed reading each and everyone of them. Keep on writing there is always room for improvement.

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Taylor Young 03 January 2010

Its good! I like it =)

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Chuck Wendigo 31 December 2009

This goes beyond deepness yet the intellectual minds see the depth

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there is a poet in me! 30 December 2009

a wonderful poem, nice imagery, ......liked it..... and thanks for your new year wishes, a very happy new year 2010 to you too! !

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 December 2009

From : Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (karur India; Male; 53) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/28/2009 11: 48: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : HI ON TO ETERNITY, NICE ONE

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 December 2009

From : Tess Fielders (Sth E Queensland Australia; Female; 56) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/27/2009 9: 26: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear Dr Subhendu Kar Thank you for your kind wishes for the new year. I have read your poem and it is most thought provoking and deep. Thank you for sharing.

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Alison Cassidy 27 December 2009

From the simplicity of a single petal to the awe and grandeur of the pyramid, your poem walks with giant steps. Your passion for language is outstanding, Subhendu and you spread words with generosity and fulsome abandon onto the canvass of your vision. Love is only hidden from the receiver, but when the giver wears a mask. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Linda Ori 27 December 2009

And time marches on into eternity! How long have the pyramids stood strong against time and the elements, and they will continue to stand. Beautiful imagery throughout, Subhendu, and a thought-provoking read. Very nice!

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Alf Hutchison 27 December 2009

Subhendu will we ever understand the depths and width of eternity... well penned my friend very deep and meaningful regards Alf

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Amber {lil coastie]} 26 December 2009

that was real lovely... i liked it. =)

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Obinna Eruchie 26 December 2009

This has wonderful scenery, and it sure has eternity in it. Keep on having passion for words in your pen.

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Ency Bearis 26 December 2009

wonderful poem....nice to read all thru..........10

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Louis Rams 25 December 2009

the last verse tells it all.

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Emu Getachew 25 December 2009

Thank you, I enjoy reading your works. This piece reminded me of the book: Love in the time of Cholera. In the book the main character was dying and as he way lying on his death bed, he said something profound and it stayed with me. I often think about it. Anyway, he said, ' The only regret i have of dying is that i am not dying for love.' Thanks for sharing.10++++++++

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 25 December 2009

Love it really excellent, i don't think i'll ever be able to write this good! ! !

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