Monday, October 30, 2006

Onset Of Winter. Comments

Rating: 2.2

the sun has hurried home faster,
matinee shows have yet to end,
the play fields have emptied the children
into respective homes,
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udit kumar sahoo
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Asma Bahrainwala 01 November 2006

'the sun has hurried home faster'....a beautiful image... nice poem... Asma...

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Chhavi Anupam 31 October 2006

Good Udit, as evenings set in faster neon lights switch on even when it is not totally dark, there is this breeze which flows with a nip in it, making you yearn for hands in hands stroll, or tea with streams of steam on a roadside joint. Chhavi Anupam

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