If I could be only yours
I'd take you to a place
Where we could be alone
In this place the stars
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very nice. i want to comment on evry poem but i won't. bottom line is ur a great writer, ur words are wonderful and u should never stop! ! ! xoxo~paris~xoxo
It is so good that I am not the least bit of an emotional romantic person... This poem absolutley affects me not.. Who am I to coo over beautiful words of pure sentiment. Especially when knowing that I would never in a million years ever write anything sweet and endearing from my soul.. I guess I should just say great poem and move on.
i dont care what anybody says, this is a very nice poem...keep it up
for some odd reason, everyone has different things to say about love, i want to take everyones words and put them together in a, good way to talk about love, very good emotion x3, mill
aww so romantic. i wish more guys were more like you. lol. good job i like it.
Very romantic indeed...If only? Thats the question but who knows the answer...Love it. Cate
Mmmmm I have a sweet tooth and this is good to satisfy it One 4you! the odd typo in there, but who is counting with a poem of such wonderfully romantic style? Smiling at you, Tai
we all have are if only's in our life. this is great. good job. I'd take you to a place Where we could be alone In this place the stars Would only shine for you cute lines. Dream Maker