Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Only Your Photograph Comments

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I never met you
Yet from your photograph
I saw the beauty in your heart
In your shining eyes
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Lyn Paul
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Ken E Hall 25 February 2014

Excellent words all from a photograph with thoughts we all have had...pain and love expressed makes you feel it with the words... well done indeed...regards

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Hazel Durham 20 February 2014

Love this Lyn, what a story you have told with such insight that brings to life a beautiful person that you have never met! Brilliant write!

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Orlando Rodriguez Jr. 14 February 2014

Reminds me of my grandfather. I am touched. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 13 February 2014

It is always a pleasure to look at the photographs of those long since gone - especially the old ones which were perhaps taken when times were harder, and people were closer than in modern times. A beautiful poem Lyn, expressing a lovely sentiment.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 12 February 2014

a picture reveals more than words, it mirrors a mind too. lovely write, Lyn.

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 February 2014

Very Beautiful poem Lyn. I would rather say regarding your poem this way... Its a blessing with a photograph you could understand the beauty of ones heart. Especially when near ones couldn't understand it. Beautiful lines.... The pain you have suffered is now released The pain left behind is unbearable To not see the pain in your eyes any longer is a blessing Yet to no longer see your eyes is pure heartache.... Again I will tell its a blessing when you feel heartache for lost soul... Your poem is fantastic and I could feel as if its poured out from your heart. Really loved reading it.

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