I know you're there,
I feel your presence,
Everywhere,
The air I breath,
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Wow.... Well, that was a very heart-touching poem. It reminded me of my grandpa, who I love a lot. Isn't it amazing how just a few words can impact the heart? That shows you have great control over words. Good job! :)
Wow, beautiful poem! Short, but the farthest thing from simple! Truly great (: I invite you to check out some of my own, and leave any advise for me as a writer, I would greatly appreciate it! sincerely - Christian Hudak
The one we love is a world... apart... full, complete and absolute.* *