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This poem has feeling, depth and beauty. Jim BoswellLess than a minute ago Beautiful metaphors. Deep thoughts and a mystery that holds the reader. As one line says it is a good journey. ok Larry StallingsLess than a minute ago ok Comment 0 Inconsistency Grace Oribhabor2 minutes ago It looks like you have some experience writing prose. However, your rhyming is a bit inconsistent. Decide which lines are going to rhyme - like first and third, or second and fourth, or all four. Keep that style through the whole poem. ok Larry StallingsLess than a minute ago ok Comment 0 Inconsistency

Man finds solace With so much of happiness