! Only Whispers Comments

A powerful write for one and all to sit up and take note....whisper loud and condemn the harm done to our world and it's inhabitants...well written Bob

whispers i heard loud and clear.......this is awesome poem with a lot of feelings and experienceof life.why cant we think that, all religion have one goal, that is to reach godhead.there is such a thin line between need and greed, which we always overlook, causing disharmony and pain for all.wonderful poem, with a message for peace and harmony.

the whispers are LOUD and clear for all to hear_ share your love, life, give to humanity, do constructive work...get over jealousy, religion, war...what a lovely msg to read, sir. poetry with a mission 10+++

This Sir is true poetry! filled with the beauty and pain of the world, this is one of the best poems I have read in awhile, it had true feeling in it and I believe a lot of what is in your heart, but also held great poetic structure, you are a brilliant poet! ! ! ! ! !

wowwwwwww a masterpiece here how come I did not see this earlier excellent write sir A++ anjali -10

Together we strive for a better life, if only people overstand life is made for living not for killing.. i dream for a UNITED STATE WORLD where we are all ONE! ! Superb writing 10 ++++++

'Then this world becomes our world for us all to love, and share.' Bob these words of yours sum up your philosophy in this, from the heart and soul epic...beautifuly put...I hope the world is listening..Regards Alf

Bob, both your anguish and anger at the state of the world are clearly articulated in this very well written poem.... I do wish it could be circulated to create a better awareness among both the political fraternity and the citizens too 10+++

Whispers came were loudly heard, of words of love, of peace, to all on earth, only now we see the beauty of our land. All free now, just one God, you and me, him and her, them and us, all people of this world. Now I see their worth, For now I surely care.... what anuniversal wish.... i surely care... beautiful write....10

Sound of thunder with a show of lightnings The light touches the earth with heavy shower The dry mud, swept away in the deep flow Those heavy murky clouds not to be seen All melting and melting and melting.... Dear poet, this is my feel, when i read here. What a commanding stoke... The time... whisper not heard The time whisper loudly heard Everything so superbly encapsulated. I just enjoyed each line And took them into my stride. Great appeal, great write.

'So I think; why does this go on and on? In this diverse and magic world, we love to see the contrasts of, seas, mountains, deserts, fields, and plains' that s what we all think sir, for how long this misery gona continue, your poem said it all.., a very strong and powerful poem that can touch the reader's mind thanks 10+++

You have a strong revolting heart revolting against anything unjust or bad, Bob...this fact, i have noticed in many of your writes...in this write you simply allow your anger and disappointment to flare ablaze...powerful awareness poem...10

anger, dismay, helplessness- all expressed with intensity, images come out alive... moral decay, some pray good sense will prevail, and the world will hear the whispers and all shall be well. Thanks Bob, this is an amazing poem, with a perfect ending.10 Mamta

This is a challenge to the politicians of the world. The length of the poem symbolises the long downward spiral of morality and respect for fellow humanity when the politicians selfishly pursue survival and recognition. You would never have put it in a few words.

it is a irony...we have to strive to be happy..we have piled up so much of rubbish and we start of with which is older..any thing which would'nt grow need'nt be of any value to us...lovely poem it put me into deep thinking..read my 'wealth' and inheritance

What a strong poem, your experience make you a son of God, Thank you sir, I bow you for this poem. Unfortunately poor polititians never get this sort of inspirations. I am very junior to comment on this, well done sir

Bob - I am so glad I have found this - must have missed it somehow - -you have encapsulated the essentials of life as nature meant it and at the same time narrated the history of the intervention of the greed in human minds - - - this is an epic which is coming with me to my favourites......... thank you sincerely from Fay.

Bob, you have very dexterously interwoven the magic of nature and horror of terror, greed, cruelty. as Mimi, says all young and old should read this poem. it resonates with what still can be- hope if we hear the whispers carefully and tune to nature and the good that is there.amazing10 Mamta

Such a truthful poem. Some people are willing to sacrifice everything for gold and wealth, even for vengeance. They didn't think of the future generation that needs a loving and peaceful world to live in. I would really love to see this poem in the front page of every newspaper in the world! You use simple but powerful words that creates a sophisticated, truthful and amazing poem. Congratulations!

Your poems are always so exhaustive; you leave nothing untouched. So well dealt with this subject with passion, emotion and honesty.