Only When The Flesh Is Peeled Comments

WoW! ! ! ! That's getting under the skin of a poem! ! ! Powerful, no holds barred, thrusting itself into life. And original. All hallmarks of Captain Cur! Top marks.

'Truth that keeps rising from the bosom's core Only when the flesh is peeled can the spirit soar'... Beautiful soul filling poem. In concept composition presentation all.5 stars, why not?

Using the sailor concept to write philosophical poems is brilliant! Thanks Captain