Saturday, April 5, 2014

Only Two People In The World? .............. [relationships/Marriage; Tongue-In-Cheek Humor; Personal? ; Quite Short] Comments

Rating: 5.0

My wives have pointed out each flaw I have,
not bothering to ease my hurt with salve.
They've said I'm mean and that I'm a bore.
They've stricken my heartstrings to the core.
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Tom Allport 09 July 2017

a funny poem of what makes the world go round? yes it's LOVE and Bri you've been bitten or smitten so many times by this bug! I will send you a comforting virtual man hug.................well written Sir.

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Sandra Feldman 13 April 2014

Men, Tenderness you do not know The milk of human kindness, In your cup, it does not flow.

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bobby brown 20 May 2019

thank you ma'dam

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Eugene Levich 13 April 2014

Have we been married to the same women? You've said it all!

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V P Mahur 08 April 2014

Dear Sir, This is what a man does before a person whom he love. But love is always painful, even in the most romantic moments. Nice ly expressed. I heartily appreciate all the pains you took to understand my poem. But that was not actually needed. Poets are a bit crazy creatures and i am the worst one of all. When my inner thoughts flow out, I say whatever I feel. The last for lines really mean that the sweet and soothing touch of the lover can pecify the painful sensation in the heart for this sensation is like a burning cinder. Thanks a lot for visiting and reading my poem so deeply.

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Noreen Carden 06 April 2014

Aw Bri don't be always giving out where would men be without women [answer back in the dark ages still trying to start a fire] ha ha just joking Bri I love the poem its very honest

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