Saturday, March 9, 2013

Only Time Knows Comments

Rating: 4.6

No one knows
Where is life now sending us
Scripture of destiny remain untold
Written in tears and in smiles
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 03 March 2020

Time as wisdom- a fascinating extended metaphor. There's so much truth in your words. You remind that often learning and gaining wisdom can only be accomplished through experience. And without time, there is no experience. Such a great poem, Soul

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 May 2018

What will be happened in future in life nobody can say except time and God. You have astutely inscribed this theme astutely in this poem. I quote....... Where and why, no i dont know..things happened in our days we never know, never we will be, as we are in puzzle in life some we know some we never we know, maybe it is better But God knows what the best behind all of fate he wrote .........best poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2014

.........I find in each of your poems you leave a little piece of your heart and soul....and this one was no exception....another fabulous and outstanding write....loved reading every line...

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Frank James Davis 11 April 2013

Much of it strikes me as a mesmerizing, profoundly wise chant. All of it, hauntingly beautiful, Soul!

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Marissa Liebowitz 30 March 2013

O my God, i wish i could write like you!

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Hans Vr 30 March 2013

So true, What a very sound wisdom, Soul. Only time knows. We can plan, we can prepare, we can expect, we can anticipate, but what will really happen, only time knows. I love the whole idea. How much do our actions and our thoughts determine what will happen in the future?

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 27 March 2013

Masterpiece this poem is sir, I love how you painted the pictures, I love the lines your brushes left and the picture is so perfect....yes no one knows what the future has in store for him/her...only time knows. Siya_! !

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Rekha Mandagere 26 March 2013

I'm just perplexed going through these matured lines. How beautifully soul captured the secret of time in his touching lines! Wonderful message: -)

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Terry O'leary 21 March 2013

So true... very nice... Terry

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 March 2013

Of tears and smiles, our destiny and fate u hav pend a perceptive wonderful poem epic style i lovd it!

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Vishal Sharma 17 March 2013

beautiful poem...so true amd awesome write..really enjoyed a lot reading this piece...

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Guess Who 15 March 2013

By the ink of sorrow it was written Amazing expression here. Nice poem Soul, of course Only god knows what time is hiding for us........ i liked how you divided your poem here just to make a simple message...... (No one knows what our fates would be,) Keep your pen wet and amaze us...... GuessWho

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Terry O'leary 15 March 2013

A wonderful, wise message

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Valerie Dohren 15 March 2013

None of us know our destiny, and it can change from day to day. I think it is better that we don't know where we are headed - great write as always Soul.

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Neela Nath Das 14 March 2013

Really time knows where and why of us. Lovely but with sad undercurrent.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 March 2013

As you say only Time Knows! An excellent philosophical poem! !

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Ramesh Rai 12 March 2013

I can never say good bye.

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Colin Bradley 12 March 2013

Beautifull poem Soul outstanding

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Time knows it and then Unwritten Soul knows a half of it..... The use of imagination has never been so philosophically well depended in your poems dear Soul. It is a very fine poem that makes one sit back and think though I think God knows not so much as Unwritten Soul knows...

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Lyn Paul 09 March 2013

This is unbelievable. Your feelings so deep in everyword. Sensitive Soul. Thankyou

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