Sunday, May 26, 2013

Only The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.8

It's a magic dance;

Don't watch where I'm going,
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Patti Masterman
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Heather Wilkins 14 July 2013

I love magic and reading about it. a sweet write with nice imagery.

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Smoky Hoss 16 June 2013

I love the sequence, the flow, and the rhyming; a wonderful poem.

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Patricia Grantham 04 June 2013

A very captivating poem. Makes one think of dancers going through the many moves to perfect ion. Watching each other as if trying to keep up the pace. Their leaping through the air as if the winds are lifting them up. Enjoyed it.

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Valerie Dohren 02 June 2013

Beautiful and inspired - conjures many lovely images.

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David Wood 30 May 2013

When I disappear there is only the wind. Lovely words Patti a good write.

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