Thursday, July 11, 2019

Only The Earth Is Made For Us Comments

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Only the earth is made for us
And for how long?
Out there in the far away
So much is dark and indifferent
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Shalom Freedman
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Jane Campion 11 July 2019

A poem that is both insightful and immense. Meshing with your faith. Who told us a God did this for us. Answer those who wrote that it was so and believed by those who have faith. If we question those thoughts of others what are we called? Why? Should we be automatons believing anything? Keep exploring the answers in your poetry.

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Manpreet Singh 11 July 2019

And Time like a threat Holds us captive in fear Before the inevitable night we will never see. I have seen many personifications of Time but this is one the best that I have seen.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 July 2019

yeah the earth is made for us only for us " inevitable night" o after this earthly life maybe we'll never see............///

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