Thursday, August 27, 2009

Only Sometimes Comments

Rating: 5.0

My pulse quickens
When you look at me
My stomache fills with butterflies
When are simply you near me
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jen capaldi
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Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

A moving poem this took me to another place and back to reality good one...

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Sanjib Das 01 October 2009

YOU ARE A GENIUS OF GENIUSES MAKE US CONFUSES YOU POEM IS A TRUE ONE I AM YOUR ADMIRER ONE I GIVE YOU 10/10

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Marieta Maglas 28 September 2009

Wonderful lyric metaphorical poem, very well expressed. It is obvious in this poem a literary enthusiasm for the sensibility generated by love...........10+++++++++

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Omar Ibrahim 01 September 2009

i liked the idea of the poem....and the poem also is fantastic...thanks for sharing your good poetry with us..

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