Sunday, June 7, 2009

////Only Soil Is Loyal Comments

Rating: 4.0

Why are you vain
O hollow man
Do you know?
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akram saqib
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Ejaz Khan 18 June 2009

A needed reminder but the words don't bite, it has to come from within, a beautiful write!

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Rafique Farooqi 15 June 2009

it is deep thought soil is our mother that feeds us everthing.....

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r khan 15 June 2009

The theme behind the poem is a powerful one, that no matter how great a man, we will all return to the grave. No matter how big a castle you create around yourself, it's no more than a glorified casket! Nicely expressed!

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Fade Ward 12 June 2009

for all the poems i have read so far they are all very good and very intereting inspirational and really lovely good write post back i give u 10+++

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Saadat Tahir 07 June 2009

very well done the truth and extract of lifes meandring ways great ill give u ten and cheers

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Shams Tahir 07 June 2009

a univesal reality described in terse manners

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

Excellent poem, I love the idea/message of this poem.10+++

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