Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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it was the only choice she had
to get out of her home
the vilonce, the abuse its all finally gone
but little did she know
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dani fries
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Payal Parande 24 July 2013

its different and well pinned, tell exactly what you want to, keep a reader interested till the end... a strong piece well done

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Gajanan Mishra 24 July 2013

finally strong, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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