Only One. Comments

You may want to correct some spelling errors. Not to be a grammar Nazi, just a suggestion. Also, you used good imagery, but the structure was spotty. Some places rhymed, some didn't or had weak rhymes (Mismatching syllables or words that sorta rhyme, but not really) . For a new poet, though, it's pretty good.

Good job bud. Wonderful contemplation, who would we want to be with. i actually saw a short film on youtube once with this very theme, this would be a nice narrative to go along with it.