Wednesday, September 7, 2005

Only Once, Again Comments

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still the time
fades so fast
makes this moment
to gently pass
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Tears In Rain
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Tofur Damico 13 January 2006

This poem really spoke to me, I like it a lot and your very talented. T

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Lylyanna Pilewski 07 September 2005

Once agian absolutely awesome! Lylyanna

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Raynette Eitel 07 September 2005

Very nice. I would say 'is left with a life full of nothing but goodbyes' or does that change your meaning? Good poem. Raynette

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