Sunday, December 28, 2008

Only Myself In A Crowded Street Comments

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Only myself walking down the crowded street,
Everyone around me like statues in a park.
Here’s a car waiting to turn,
There’s an old man feeding the birds.
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Jessica Kissner
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Emancipation Planz 28 December 2008

Hi Jessica.. I love the way you have gone looking and depicted this poem... you found much in this crowded street to share.. I looked at the You.. in 'myself' and found and 'elf'.. magical.. just like when you looked closely and saw the insect and butterfly... Keep righting them one peace at a time..

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Jessica Kissner

Jessica Kissner

Elmhurst, Illinois
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