Thursday, May 7, 2009

Only My Friend Comments

Rating: 4.0

We first started as friends.
And thats how we wanted to go
Just nothing else
we stayed like this for months
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Scarlette Romero
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Ency Bearis 07 May 2009

nice introspective write about love vs friends..... just only I can't comprehend the word dei - in you your line (We know it wasn't going to dei) maybe you mean to die? , also (I shouldn't blame you for not loving e) maybe you are from Batangas and you took your accent. However you expressed very well the verses, deep from your emotion and a very nice presentation....8

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