She opens her eyes
fearful t e a r s drain her cheeks
the b r e e z e dries them h
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Amazing! Yes, indeed, only mortals die but there are a lot of mortals walking down these streets in the World and they are already dead. I love your creative style, Priyanka! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
Thank you guys! So so much!