Thursday, October 20, 2011

Only Mortals Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

She opens her eyes
fearful t e a r s drain her cheeks
the b r e e z e dries them h
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Priyanka Dey
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Priyanka Dey 25 November 2011

Thank you guys! So so much!

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Yes, indeed, only mortals die but there are a lot of mortals walking down these streets in the World and they are already dead. I love your creative style, Priyanka! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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Kee Thampi 23 October 2011

good to read...in this wonderful stylish poem

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