Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Only Memories Remain... Comments

Rating: 3.8

You appear at night as a ghost in my mind
and vanish like a shadow in the sunlight.
To catch you is impossible -
to tell you is too hard.
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GHOST WRITER
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Dee Daffodil 12 July 2007

Very clear imagery...terrific poem! Hugs, Dee

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Not a member No 4 12 July 2007

Deeply and clearly expressive of a strong and lasting emotional bond, and displays impressive writing skills. Good poem. I enjoyed this. xx jim

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Original Unknown Girl 12 July 2007

This is beautiful, there is a line in there which resonates with me. 'Flip the switch', I wrote a similar one called 'Trip the Switch', it has similar undertones though the style of yours is more about the dark hours and I understand that too. Great piece.... lingers in the mind. HG: -) xx

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