Only Memories Remain Comments

MEMORIES REMAIN... OF THE LOVE EMBEDDED IN MY REALMS... AWESOME.........

This is very good indeed, Reshma. The way you've set out the lines is visually very satisfying and at the same time, it works well with the rhythm of the piece. 'Cashew nuts and sipped wine' is especially eloquent. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Remains? ...yes...sweet memories of gulped golden red wine... sober and silent reflections...well let out 10

Yes! only memories remain. ' Of dreams and their interpretations Of brightly lit hands And happy lines of fate Folks separate from us Their memories Continue to live.'

oh, this is sad.Someday you will use that memories to move forward. A nice flow of words. Lovely.