Only the words are missing
For the feelings I haven't been expressing
Only the pictures are fading
From the love I haven't yet made to you
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When in a relationship, there is so much to be explored, so much to be shared so as to make it a lively and a lasting experience. The poet has put across the entire scenario rather beautifully. Thanks.
I liked this poem very very much dear poet. It ist he hunger of the soul. it is really the appetite of the mind that we seek the eternal. as u say everything lied in the realm of immortality. You promise later in the poem today i shall touch the infinity in you and in me. This ist he greatest adventure of the human soul. It is real mystical adventure. Thank yu dear poet for you mystical heart an the mystical taste. Thank you. Thank you. tony
Tony, I am very happy that you like this poem so much. And overjoyed with your feedback and insights. You are one of my favourite poets on this site, so your very kind words mean so very much to me. Thank you, once again.
An insightful depiction of the profound and spiritual nature of love ❤ - a journey of bliss, exquisitely written from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Chinedu, thank you for reading my poem. And for your kind words and very positive feedback.
Beautifully Heart Sung! ! ! Wonderfully Touching Song! ! ! Well Written! ! ! Definite 10s! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! !
Rebecca, you are inspiring me to start writing these songs ASAP. Thank you so much!
Nikhila, thank you for your positive feedback. Much appreciated!
This song-to-be poem reminds of the song of the same title popularized by Trademark band from German. It also brings me to recall the song ONLY LOVE KNOWS WHY by Peter Cetera of the Chicago band.... Maybe your composition will be similar to the music of Michael W. Smith, one of my faves.... I'll rate it 10..... God bless..
You definitely have an ear for music. Thank you so much, Bernard for both your feedback and the 10. Greatly appreciated.
Love is the key! ! Love and dreams. With the muse of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
That is one powerful way of depressing LOVE! Grandiose! Merci
I'm very happy that you approve, Sandra. Thanks for your positive feedback and for the 10.
Sorry, I used the wrong word, (not depressing,) it should be suppressing Love and then opening totally to it in the most passionate and sincere way.
Sandra, thank you for the clarification. I must admit that I had a little difficulty with that one.
What an amazing expression of love! It avoids tiresome cliches and finds instead a freshness which is so persuasive for being personal rather than generic. I like the structure: the opening section in a block of long lines gives your philosophy of love, citing both what you have fulfilled and what must still be fulfilled. You don't press your case or puff up your merits. This is simply honest to the core. That verse paragraph would make a satisfying poem. But then - you surprise us by putting your philosophy into action by the short-lined resolutions that push your poem from reverie into reality. And both parts are thoroughly persuasive. It shows me if we prepare ourselves to be true lovers and commit ourselves to that TRUTH OF LOVE, well, there will be TWO happy creatures.
Daniel, you have made me one happy creature. You have given so much positive insightful feedback that I can't thank you enough. And especially since you are a poet of great merit. I am humbled and honoured.