Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Only In The Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why is it only in the winter
that we notice them?
The vulnerable on our streets,
the runaways and those
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 20 December 2009

This is a fine, strongly articulated poem, David - one of your best. The structure (repetition of the question 'Why is it only in the winter that we notice them?) forces the reader to really question the callousness of most who see but don't notice because they are too preoccupied examining their own navels. Your theological heart is very much to the fore in this disturbing poem about the lack of social justice in the world. Congratulations. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Carol Gall 15 December 2009

very good point david if only 10

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