Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Only In My Dreams Comments

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I have met her
she captivates my thoughts
I have seen her
my imagination she intrigues
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Monica Paris
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Tanay Pathak 20 January 2009

It seems a contridiction, you should rather change the second last line, though its a nice poem

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