Sunday, July 25, 2010

Only In My Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel like I’m broke
I can’t find myself, my pieces were been broke
My heart doesn’t recognize your presence
‘Cause you changed a lot, not the usual essence
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Eyan Desir 27 July 2010

Good write well expressed....

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Antonio Liao 25 July 2010

like meadow that bloom flower, where the rendezvous of all the flying animal play...each verse you share...lives forever to the readers......a beautiful swing of poetry....God bless a 10 +++

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Whisperkwane Lamb 25 July 2010

wow! speak of a dream...dreams sometimes do not make sense...when a dream is in pieces it speaks to one all broken up...I feel lost reading your words...but I understand a broken dream...as well as a broken heart...the two match...making feeling hard to bear...I get you Sheldon slow at frist..but I get you, ...

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 25 July 2010

In some way, I can relate to your poem. Seems to me, dreams are disassociated memories and are difficult to sort out or make sense of.Nice write

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 July 2010

well expressed. and the words are arranged the way you can make a reader feel what you feel....

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