Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Only If You Take Me To The Where We Started... Comments

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Only if you take me to the point where we started
I'd never ask you to stay for me, how can I? where you wanna leave..
I'd never ask you to redo the things, respeak the word of solace and comfort..
Only if you take me to the point where we started..
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sophia hayyat
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 02 February 2010

Absolutely brilliant! ! Sopia, you're a special one, your poem says it all. God bless you!

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Shelly Shelly 15 August 2009

++++++++++100 what a poem...a must must read for all...its really brilliant..

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 03 August 2009

I'd never ask you to retravel for me.. Only if you take me to the point where we started.. Better that illusionary world where i held angel's little finger.. Had that protection and rest... Held that unending 'aching joys' closest to my chest.. The dearest asset of my life.. By God! i'd never ask you to return Only if you take me to the point where we started.. Excellent romantic piece.......

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Varun Batra 17 December 2008

The place of dream.. Silence.. Serenity and eternal protection... Nice Poem +10

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