Saturday, April 26, 2014

Only If We Never Grew Up Comments

Rating: 4.8

The cab starts at the doorway
So our hearts, to sink
And we all stand there
Mom flaunting the buoyancy
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Elisha Chhabra
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 April 2014

Woooow! ..this is a masterpiece Elisha, excellently written, excellently worded. Magnificent poem...I have always been the one leaving for in far places, and those tears have always been a factor that pulls me home after every two weeks. I love this poem. Siya_! !

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Susan Lacovara 26 April 2014

What a sensitive poem, delivered with an hi esty that cannot be overlooked. I invite you to read my poem, Must We Always Part In Autumn, written for my brother when we have to say goodbye. I loved your write, so well done. I hope you always remain close in heart, no matter the distance that keeps you apart. PEACE

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Elisha Chhabra 26 April 2014

This is actually the 2min moment, when my brother left home for job thing. Thanks for reading :)

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Satheesh Kumar 26 April 2014

Very interesting poem... Satheesh kumar

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