Monday, January 5, 2015

' Only If It Was '! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.5

There would be you, there wouldn't be you
Your world will care for a while, this world will have no clue
Your existence is significantly nonexistent to this world, even if you do
This world is your world you thought it was,
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Aastha Uppal
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Aastha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumud Ranjan 28 November 2015

Why do you not know 'this' world is not 'your' world but a 'worldly' world...This is indeed the wrong world.well written!

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Kumud Ranjan 28 November 2015

Why do you not know 'this' world is not 'your' world but a 'worldly' world. This is the wrong world! nicely written.

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Kelly Kurt 14 September 2015

A beautiful poem, Aastha. Nicely written

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 08 January 2015

Because only then will you ever know 'this' world is not 'your' world but a 'worldly' world! ! Beautifully expressed poem where sincerity of love is superseded by worldly world Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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