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Pretending to have him,
Tossing back your head and laughing.
Flapping your pretty lashes with a shiver,
He vanishes when you look in the mirror.
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hey Sanika, , a very nice poem to read dear...not just because of the rhyming of ur poem but the concept and feel is also too good.....keep writing my friend..all the best!
thank you for commenting so religiously pranayee. i am really touched. i tried to portray a widow who is a tumble of emotions without her lover. thanks again! !
You clothe and paint your face, but black tears smudges your gaze. as you lift a stone and shatter the mirror, thus murdering the gruesome reminder. Nice flow of rhythm, well composed poem, thanks for sharing
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7/20/2025 4:20:01 PM # 1.0.0
Great poetry! I am reminded of the short story Widow by Gudipat Venkat Chalam. The emotional turmoil of a widow is beautifully evoked in the poem. Thanks for sharing..
thank you sir.