Only If Comments

Dear Kanav, Had I had the power to trample, I would prefer to be an elephant. But since I have none, I would just like to ride one! Yes, limitations shapes us along with our capabilities. Nice write.

Dear Kanav, Had I had the power to trample, I would prefer to be an elephant. But since I have none, I would just like to ride one! Yes, limitations shapes us along with our capabilities. Nice thought.

Dear Kanav, Had I had the power to trample, I would prefer to be an elephant. But since I have none, I would just like to ride one! Yes, limitations shapes us along with our capabilities. Nice write.

as i was going through it, i was wondering where the poem was going.....i liked the way it ends.....n i had a gud laugh when i went through the part abt crow...n the way u wrote it with those rhymes is just grt..... mark my words...u will reach grt heights........a born poet......kp it up...

Ah, perhaps a dangerous friend to have. I expected differently from the title since I have written one called - If Only - Adeline

The facade we put on in our daily lives because were human and the melting pot of emotions that is just lying beneath the surface! This is so funny, a gem! !

Cute Kanav. Beautiful verse!

I like the way you have put this together, it made me smile. Remind me not to fall out with you.

Dear, forgiveness is the one who unlock our pain to get released, unchain the heart from uncertain feeling, if animal do hurt they did to protect themselves, and as a part of their animal instinct, but in their soul they know how precious life is, even they can work together to be one team. we human have more mind to bring our life more alive beautifully, i love the end stanza that mean we supposed to be a full character of human who know the value of soul and yes mind....if we not use it, we are same to others....only if....we are human we know what we are...leading for the best solution_Soul