Saturday, December 1, 2012

Only Human In The Light Comments

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You are everything I want in neat little package of unquestionable desire…, and everything I am compelled to be repelled for - Love, Sex, Lust Greed, the avarices of the guilty and the human.

On one hand I want to feel your body pulsating vibrantly against me as if you are a completion of unity that I have always wanted to know as the forbidden fruit and synergy of two united beings in mind… spirit… and most of all…… flesh
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 February 2022

A very well expressed and engaging poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 February 2022

A very honest, discerning and powerful write. A brilliant analysis on how we view love. Yes, there are always two faces of love.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2022

one is the human compassionate element found in the thirst for love or the closest proximity of love in passion, in those moments I feel like you heal me with your body. That's the human side....naked, clean and clear-cut expression...liked it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 December 2012

Woah intense as u poetically dissect d forbidden passion feel. Gah! As u weigh d matter i hope u make d right decision for luckily its not impossible to. Ah but moralist warnings are bitter pills but beneficial no end.

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