Monday, June 8, 2009

Only Goal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every night before sleep
I always think of my life
And somehow I feel
Something is missing
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Antonio Liao 26 November 2009

a great stanza at the last paragraph, showered hope to those in vain..... the last hope of success resemble at this poem....this a poem whose dear heart leaves in pain....and every mourner should read this poem.... letting the stamina to accept the realm of destiny....God bless you my dear poet...a 10/10

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Shashendra Amalshan 09 June 2009

hello brother! ! ! hey this is a nice write indeed....and i m very glad you v expressed this inspirational few lines with me...you know i tooo feel like this some times but it is easier said than to forget everything and move forward..... and i m sure you ll do great and we will always stand in stand ovation.......great brother....keep up the good mode and keep writing great pieces....10++ with lots of love and best wishes shan

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Eyan Desir 09 June 2009

Good flow good write 10s

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Lee Crowell 09 June 2009

a crowded stadium all in unison roar for you Kranthi you deserve that just for your achievements in poetry but then, what next? would you be satisfied or would you need to take it to a higher level? sometimes that empty vaccuum is never filled you have already given us great things, don't fall into the trap thinking we need more from you hey, this poem is really making me think great write!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 08 June 2009

life is meant for realizing the divne, life is fulfilled after realizing the divine.............a good write.....

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Louis Rams 08 June 2009

our goals we all achieve even if its in our dreams. perserverance will always rule, this i taught myself in school. IT IS A GREAT WRITE A TEN

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Catrina Heart 08 June 2009

Lets all have stars to inspire us and make a way to reach our goal............10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 June 2009

Let’s achieve the set desire/goal...step by step... before that we should keep ourselves alive. Nice deep idea,10+++

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Indira Renganathan 08 June 2009

Living with aspirations and a goal is the real life alive...otherwise it is deadly only....nice thought

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a very good flow of thought and words in this poem...convicing

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Joseph Poewhit 08 June 2009

Words have a real honesty to them. Having a goal in life gines us direction

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nice. i enjoy the format and the way it reads.. um, emotions in it. and great ending.

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Janell Cressman 08 June 2009

it's really good to set goals for your self and challenge your self every day to meat those goals, nice one! ! !

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rago rago 08 June 2009

Let me wish a goal of success.......... always success lick who work hard........

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