Every night before sleep
I always think of my life
And somehow I feel
Something is missing
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hello brother! ! ! hey this is a nice write indeed....and i m very glad you v expressed this inspirational few lines with me...you know i tooo feel like this some times but it is easier said than to forget everything and move forward..... and i m sure you ll do great and we will always stand in stand ovation.......great brother....keep up the good mode and keep writing great pieces....10++ with lots of love and best wishes shan
a crowded stadium all in unison roar for you Kranthi you deserve that just for your achievements in poetry but then, what next? would you be satisfied or would you need to take it to a higher level? sometimes that empty vaccuum is never filled you have already given us great things, don't fall into the trap thinking we need more from you hey, this poem is really making me think great write!
life is meant for realizing the divne, life is fulfilled after realizing the divine.............a good write.....
our goals we all achieve even if its in our dreams. perserverance will always rule, this i taught myself in school. IT IS A GREAT WRITE A TEN
Lets all have stars to inspire us and make a way to reach our goal............10+++
Let’s achieve the set desire/goal...step by step... before that we should keep ourselves alive. Nice deep idea,10+++
Living with aspirations and a goal is the real life alive...otherwise it is deadly only....nice thought
a very good flow of thought and words in this poem...convicing
Words have a real honesty to them. Having a goal in life gines us direction
nice. i enjoy the format and the way it reads.. um, emotions in it. and great ending.
it's really good to set goals for your self and challenge your self every day to meat those goals, nice one! ! !
Let me wish a goal of success.......... always success lick who work hard........
a great stanza at the last paragraph, showered hope to those in vain..... the last hope of success resemble at this poem....this a poem whose dear heart leaves in pain....and every mourner should read this poem.... letting the stamina to accept the realm of destiny....God bless you my dear poet...a 10/10