Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, February 16, 2014

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Jealousy takes us nowhere
We got to make it sure
There exists no anger
We should prove good manager
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 February 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 February 2014

welcome remirez maricel a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 February 2014

Sarah Russell and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta WELCOME a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 February 2014

i feel it was meant for me. Ti'anna Clark6 minutes ago : '( Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 February 2014

A one. Michael King4 minutes ago Sentences could be improved by reading them out aloud and judging the metre and rhythm for yourself. I can tell your native language is not English though, so maybe it is passable. Content not so much. Clichéd to invalidity.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 February 2014

Jealousy takes us nowhere We got to make it sure

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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