Thursday, April 30, 2009

Only For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the time I have realised that you the one
These flowers seem to bloom just for u
The sun seems to rise just for u
The birds seems to chirp just for u
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veena yadav
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Surya . 15 May 2009

a wonderfull poem on love.great rhyming lines.meaningfull. nice to read. voted 10 surya

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a romantic and lovely piece..the flow is just heartwarming

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Dr Yogesh Sharma 01 May 2009

very good. very good in rhyme and tone'

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Hari Khabrani 01 May 2009

Dear poet, Is it the same commuter awaiting for? Good write. Poem in contiuity.

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premji premji 01 May 2009

beautiful write... please read my poem ' spring in the wilderness'

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veena yadav

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