Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Only For The Kings Comments

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As a child I was taught to dream,
Dream of bigger and better things.
Now I am told that it's all a scheme,
A dream meant only for the kings.
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Mal Sharp
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Mal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2015

The fighting we must do to live, The life that we see for our own. Sacrifices we've had to give, Our actions we've had to condone. ......of course it is. So nicely envisioned and beautifully presented. A n intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing dear Mal, keep the ball rolling.....10

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