Friday, September 22, 2006

Only Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cool wind blew freely making my hair cover my face,
I recalled a line from D. H. Lawrence's 'Lady Chatterley's Lover',
About hiding one's face and baring all other places,
To feel the breeze with my body uncovered,
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Vallerie Lobell
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Cecil (cj) Krieger 23 September 2006

A most beautiful discription Vallerie... a definite 10!

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Foster Blaine 22 September 2006

a serene portrait- tinged with the loneliness that 'only fall' can evoke. i thought the last line was especially memorable.. foster

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R H 22 September 2006

A wonderfully reflective write Vallerie. Very evocative. Justine

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