Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, August 23, 2012

Only Desire Will Not Work Comments

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Only desire will not give good start
Feel from inner depth and start
Poetry and emotions start with tears
That speaks of your anguish to bear
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Sheri Moroe8 hours ago This is so true, Words are like water, a wild crashing wave of emotions that spill from your soul onto the paper. Well written. Comment +2 cool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Lavon Ford8 hours ago nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Gabriel Mican8 hours ago well done Comment +1 Well done!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

You put your heart into this Tim Murray8 hours ago Your work has real substance. You hold nothing back, and I respect that. Comment +1 very good poem

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Knight Fizzstorm 23 August 2012

Excellent poem sir. Much valuable knowledge you give to share.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2012

Only desire will not give good start Feel from inner depth and start

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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