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Beautiful clouds Without any narrow borders Nicely penned

From clouds to real life The poem brings a spectacular feeling. Thanks Soran

Consolatory tears of clouds Are announced And put a black banner On the dusty trees Beside long- elusive roads- - -you draw such great scenes with your words! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Other times become White hats on the tops of high mountains- - - - > tickled me with the originality of this and how very well it conjured up the image! ! !

This is a glorious piece......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

Dear Rose thanks for revisiting this poem again and commenting on it, I hope you have enjoyed rereading it, Many thanks

The ultimate stanza is deeply poignant. Like in life, sometimes it is full of wonders and happiness.and.there are days that are so dark and threatening, creating fear following us like shadow. A great poem that the brilliant Poet should be proud of.

I love clouds that is why I have to come back and read this marvelous poem again. One of the best descriptions on clouds that I have ever read. So unique and beautiful. " Other times become white hats on top of high mountains. " Great imagination! !

dear Shaun..Hello I thank you for your fine poetic feelings, even if my poems have not been used as a poem for the day on the top of the list for any day, but what matters to me is the serious reading of educated and aware readers like you, Professor Shaun, all the best

Great poems that delight should be reread from time to time. This is one of said greats. Thank you so much Soran for sharing your great gift. Another10++ but your magnificent poem deserves more and soon to be recognised as a Poem of the Day like so many more of your outstanding poems. Take care Soran.

An encompassing poetry embedded with gems. A poem that can withstand the test of time. So beautifully crafted and well executed. Onto my Poem List.

There are Poets that could start their poem with powerful lines like a cobra ready to grip the reader. Soran is one of them. The title of this poem and the opening lines are just fascinating. They tingle the mind and drew the eyes to saturate the wholeness of the poem. Until the end, the Poet had given the reader that element of mystery that grips the reader to the very last word.

Lovely poem. The power of observation turns into creative thoughts and poetic imagination.

You have such an expressive style- the words you choose carry the right weight and savor and draw your reader into your world of earth-based philosophy. In other words, dang, you're good! ! ! Talented, original, and exciting. This poem is 10++++++++++++++ and into my fav list

you are the one who recognize the genuine works, I am glad there are some clever and wise poetry writers and readers such as you, Many thanks for having time to read this humble poem...Regards

The first two stanzas give brilliant imagery. Then you intend to talk factual. Meaningful poem Soran. Philosophic indeed 10+

Brilliant and breath-taking in equal measure. The phrases 'Is all that we see and seem, is but a dream within a dream. And ' How fragile we are' by Sting. Spring to mind after reading this sublime poem. Thank you Soran and Happy New Year to your good self. 10++ and added to my ethereal thinking treasure chest.

Directions! ! Romance of nature with, The fragrance of life! Yesterday is gone too soon with the wind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A wonderful, soulful poem with great phrases such as long-elusive roads and silent chimneys

thanks for this amazing comment, wish you all the best..