Wednesday, February 20, 2019

Only A Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

The whole of a journey still to be traveled
is much like a novel begun
with threads of the story not yet unraveled
and windings of plot to be spun.
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 20 August 2019

I was inspired by you to write a poem multiverse..with a little different setting as poetry being the ever expanding cosmetic muse, funny how inspiration comes from reading another’s work, looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

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Harley White 23 August 2019

If you have not seen my poem called M-Theory Musings, it explains a lot about the multiverse theory. Even though your poem uses a different approach for the term, you might enjoy reading it.

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Bill Cantrell 17 August 2019

I must say, this is one of your best! ! Multiverse with bubbles each hopefully with its own wise owl in whatever form it’s enchanting surroundings permit, empyrean spheres are indeed placed before the eyes of true poets as yourself, I simply love this poem!

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Harley White 18 August 2019

I’m glad you read it and liked it so much! I enjoyed writing this one and of course bringing in the concept of the multiverse which I often do in my poems. Thank you for your high praise!

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C F 12 March 2019

Very nicely written poem about existence, the universe, life, everything that seem there forever, all fly away in just a moment in time. Beautiful write.

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Harley White 12 March 2019

Thank you for your insightful, encouraging comment! I see that you perceived perfectly what I wished to convey in the poem…

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