Fresh lilies cut
On a summer afternoon
Whiteness and purity,
Angelic, dust
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I agree with s. zaynab. This is one of your best poems in quite some time. Well done and five stars!
Thank you for your comment. Praise should never be taken for granted. So, highly appreciated.
Wow one of your best, begins in joy with metaphoric use of nature for bliss then ends in dejection. Kudos for this one! ! Plz also read and comment my newest poem titled, 'In and out the lusty nil wedding bells ' tion
What great pleasure is given, when a poem by you written is so well received and understood!
Beautiful poem Sandra x Well done. Thanks for sharing x
The lilies died-----------envision.Truly heat rending.But thanks to u for having shared your dream.
Very touched by your lovely and enchanting words for this simple poem. Thank you so much!